which do you think better?

hi! i've got a new blog to post making process of my illustrations an3 i'm planning to use it with english and japanese. i want to make it easy to see, so which do you think better? i'd like to have some opinions.
------
1
おはようございます
good morning

みんな元気？
how is going everyone?

今日は暑くなりそうな1日ですね
it seems today is a hot day

また明日！
see you tomorrow!

------
2
おはよう
みんな元気？
今日は暑くなりそうな1日ですね
また明日！

good morning
how is going everyone?
it seems today is a hot day
see you tomorrow!
------
please stop by my new blog if post some articles★